Week Four -The Pitch

   Yesterday we presented our pitch to the class. I think it was an average pitch. We added all of our work and research together onto a prezi and delegated different reading parts to different people in the group. I think to improve our pitch we could have ran through it a few more times so that we were completely prepared and i also think we should have added informaton about the actors we found and how we wanted our actors to be e.g. we want the criminal to be sinister and threatening as he is a criminal and a kidnapper. We also want him to be well educated as serial killers are generally highly intelligent.